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by *NoodlesAddict, Feb 11, 2013, 3:46:42 AM
Literature / Poetry / Human Nature / Free Verse

When their ideals will be unraveled
like the rusty strings of an old guitar
When no one will be there to wipe the tears they caused you
Don't wonder why you can't see the darkness in deserted alleys
It is because it will be in their "hearts"

Dirty containers of people who says their prayers before they sleep
And stab your soul in daylight
Those you should be afraid...

Those who steal your soul because they think
they'll save theirs
The beautiful words of your enemies
And the bitter of your friends
Because many will feign to be your family
Yet, everything but love they'll give you
Those you should be afraid...

Run, go away
The darkness in their hearts of them who call themselves protectors
-Your protectors-
Is contagious
It will kill you
Not your body
But your dreams
And they will make you what you hated the most
A copy of themselves

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by *NoodlesAddict, Jan 8, 2013, 10:01:43 AM
Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse

When the wind blows,
my mind fills with caramel...

I don't know why
And I'm not interested in finding out
It just happens
Every time
The wind whispers love songs
on sunny days
Or screams furiously
on cold ones
I can smell your voice
It's like pineapple and kisses.

So unique
as my tears
And special
as mother's love to her child
Really, how this love tastes?
Blue, candy, pain, caress?

I don't understand this feeling
The caramel in my mind
Is like balancing on a glassy rope:
Terrifying but still
Beautiful.

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An Underground City (4 Final, Extended End)Ralf and his gang walked out of the centre of Celintium. They headed to the west side of the mountains towards Miritror a small deserted village with hardly any people and ravaged buildings. They passed some dark buildings ready to fall and took an alley headed to the upper levels of the mines. No one walked there so the four men took of their masks and lowered their hoods.

After ten minutes of a rough climbing they met themselves in front of a tall and imposing tower made of red colored rocks. That building seemed new and well preserved and a sense of vibrancy was wafting on the air. Ralf got closer to a wooden door and even though the placAn Underground City (4 Final, Extended End) by *NoodlesAddict

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An Underground City (4 Final)“Who is Gilda?” Emma asked Gresilda.

The woman had refused to answer any of Emma’s questions the previous night and insisted that she should get some rest. Now, as the sun had risen in a hot and suffocating morning, Emma, Gresilda and her children were pacing down the paved roads of Celinthium. They passed through the populous and alive neighborhoods and then took a channel out of the centre of the city, deeper into the mountains. There, the air was pleasantly cooler but the moisture stuck on Emma’s exposed skin and made her joins hurt. Anne, Hugh and Nicolas didn’t seem to mind and ran before the two ladies chaAn Underground City (4 Final) by *NoodlesAddict

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A Poem of ErrorsBlack and white it is
Real life, I was
Optimistic but still (a)
Key is missing, I think of
Every moment we had and
Now it's broken, oh my
Heart is bleeding and my
Eyes are dreaming, the day you walked
Away, you pushed me off your way and
Ruined all the way
The symphony of MayA Poem of Errors by *NoodlesAddict

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An Underground City (3)All the way to his house the boy was rambling on none stop. He led her on the other side of the underground city where seemed to be the residence of the people. There were identical round doors with an identical round window to the left in every channel now. Some had pots and flower beds outside of their doors while others had wind chimes, even though wind didn’t blow down there. Mothers had brooms on their hands cleaning the paved road and chatting with each other and the laughter of the children playing here and there was heard from everywhere. Emma remembered the stories her grandmother used to tell her when she was little. People thAn Underground City (3) by *NoodlesAddict

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An Underground City (2)Emma walked hurriedly through the mass of people wandering in the market and shopping. The wooden object around her hand was now shining brightly attracting much more attention that she already had. People stopped at their places and turned to watch here with suspicious expressions. She tried to take the bracelet off her hand but circular object seemed glued on her hand and heavy, like a pair of handicaps. She had to get away of there. There were too many people. Emma pushed a man aside with her shoulder and ran to the end of the plaza. In the first alley she found, she turned right and kept running till she was away of the buzzing market. ShAn Underground City (2) by *NoodlesAddict

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An Underground City (1)Emma unlocked the front door and got inside her apartment. A loud noise welcomed her, a constant banging coming from somewhere from the kitchen. The girl threw her bag on the floor and ran to the sound. She found foams covering the floor near the lower cabinets where the washing machine was. Emma ran through the foams and the water splashing the furniture around and turned off the machine. It had broken down for good this time. She took a big basket and started putting the clothes out of the washer to wooden box. She had emptied it all when she heard a scratching sound from the can of the washer. The girl put her hand inside and felt some rouAn Underground City (1) by *NoodlesAddict

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40. 4:29 AMI walk the dark street on my own
Only accompanied by street lights.
The cold wind's chilling to the bone
As I walk through one of many nights.
Sometimes a single cab drives past my side
Sharing loneliness and silence inside.

My feet walk on, unable to stop.
The skin becomes numb in the cold air.
I walk past an abandoned shop,
The gaping black holes like dead eyes stare.
A bunch of drunk Nazis with slogans slurred
I can avoid, don't understand a word.

The night is cold, the night is deep.
A turkish diner is open still.
While the customers seem to sleep
The employee trains their crossword skill
I walk on, I know I will make it t

40. 4:29 AM

by *Diluculi

Indeed it's very hard to start criticizing this poem. I liked the fact that it's complete. It starts with the fact that the walker is l...

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Towers - 1 - 003The silence following this statement was almost painful in its intensity. Faced with this revelation, it took several moments for it to truly sink in: The Triumvirate wanted Rifel to take his student's life. When Duncan found the will to speak, Valessa could have sworn that, confronted with such a situation, she would have chosen the exact same words:

"Wh-what are you talking about, sir?"

"It's just as it sounds. They want me to kill you. A replacement has already been found, and--"

"And what!?" Duncan retorted. "You're going to listen to them just like that? Rifel, surely you know me better than to just... dispose of me like some pest!

Towers - 1 - 003

by ~KyleLambert

A very very good first piece. The beginning really blows your mind and the characters have clear personalities. Rifel is a strong chara...

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Fantasy Themes

Journal Entry: Fri May 10, 2013, 7:39 AM

Hey everyone! Whatcha doing???

I'm still fed up with the paperwork for Finland, owww God, so stressed! Cant wait to get over with it and go to the beach and swiiiiiiiim with my bubby and puppy! SUMMER! Well, yeah, I have my exams the other month, responsibilities never stop!

For the time being I have some fantasy ideas... till I write em down and nothing again... So optimistic! Hahahahaahah

I have some flying - pilot ideas if you're interesting.

So well, have fun and enjoy your summer! Use sunblock lotion everyone!

I'll be around!

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Listening to: Eleges - Mellises
Watching: red data girl, vivid suisei no gargantia
Eating: on diet
Drinking: lots of water (trying)

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Kelly
Artist | Hobbyist | Literature

Greece

Well, hey!
I'm Kelly and I'm a hobbyist author, at least for now. I study Early Childhood Education and I really enjoy reading and writing. I was really bad at finishing my projects but recently I got better working a lot. When I have an idea I become so excited and I can't calm down until I write in a story. I hope you really forgive my misspellings because english isn't my mother tongue.

Also, my worst disadvantage is my lack to reread my works. Once something is finished, I can't even review it for grammar mistakes!

Q:Why did I start writing?
A: Because I didn't like the ends of the books I was reading.

I am

(hyper - kind) ,

and

! All of these and more!

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Journal History

May 10, 2013 Fantasy Themes
Mar 29, 2013 Lazy Days... Busy Days...
Feb 2, 2013 My Shop!!!
Jan 12, 2013 New Series, Projects, Busy busy busy...!
Dec 29, 2012 Long Time...
Dec 1, 2012 Improvising
Oct 30, 2012 Ghost....
Oct 24, 2012 In and Out...
Sep 25, 2012 Thank you everyone!!!!
Sep 12, 2012 Back to Work!

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*TheFinalHikari 4 days ago Writer

Welcome to

We have a lot of ways for our members to get involved! We host a prompt on a weekly basis as well as many new and exciting summer programs for you to enjoy.

The Synergy program is designed to provide participants with somebody they can count on for help and readership. Participants are assigned in pairs and each member will tutor, inspire, critique, and help each other.

The Socratic Circle chat room is open on Saturdays from 8 PM to 9 PM.

The Fount of Knowledge and Wisdom is where you can share your favorite books, stories, movies, TV shows, and more, which will be posted every Saturday.

The Quotebook is our new magazine that will consist of features from every gallery as well as member features. It will be published in PDF format on the first of every month.

We also hold contests with great prizes!

If you have any questions, feel free to ask.

*NoodlesAddict 3 days ago Hobbyist Writer

Yeaaaaa I know some of them....!

They seem very interesting. I'll participate for sure in some of them.

Thanksssss!

=Thebrokengod May 10, 2013 Hobbyist Writer

Wheres Toby?

*NoodlesAddict May 10, 2013 Hobbyist Writer

He was drooling on my glasses so I put him in drawer, sleppy pup

~sharkgirl567 Apr 26, 2013 New member Hobbyist Writer

Thank you for the fave!

*NoodlesAddict Apr 27, 2013 Hobbyist Writer

Naa it's nothing

~1000Themes Jan 7, 2013

I just finished eating noodles and hot sauce just last night

I came to say that I'm glad to see you enjoyed my short story "I Carried You"

If you ever get the time, take a look around my gallery. Who knows, you might find something else you like [link]

Thx again

*NoodlesAddict Jan 7, 2013 Hobbyist Writer

Owwww noodles noodles!!!

You don't need to thank me. It was a very good story. I really liked it.

Of course anytime soon. Make more good pieces to drag me again to your gallery.

Good Job!

*Diluculi Jan 6, 2013 Hobbyist Writer

thank you for the of "4:29 AM"

Have a good day!

*NoodlesAddict Jan 6, 2013 Hobbyist Writer

It was a very good piece. I liked it very much. Keep going!

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